tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424388333209449918.post6247315614672759666..comments2023-05-16T04:26:08.712-07:00Comments on Mesmerizing Writing: How Much Crying is too Much Crying?Gisellehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04973464361534653175noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424388333209449918.post-756834289558075922012-09-03T16:25:24.332-07:002012-09-03T16:25:24.332-07:00I know what you mean. My first book isn't wort...I know what you mean. My first book isn't worth editing much either. My MC cried a lot in that one to.Gisellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04973464361534653175noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2424388333209449918.post-12082584041243614632012-09-03T12:39:10.038-07:002012-09-03T12:39:10.038-07:00And I already commented on another post of yours, ...And I already commented on another post of yours, but I saw this on the side and clicked it. ALL my characters in my first book cried way too much. They had reason to, I guess. They were taken from their home, their families were killed, and they're being forced to do certain things in this society they've been hiding from that are horrible! But they cry to much. I'm too lazy to edit that book, it was my first. Maybe I'll go back to it eventually and take out some of the crying. Even my male MC cries...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05439500317543155775noreply@blogger.com